This poem has a lot of good ideas.This is my interpretation: Some day we will all be forgotten, and there will be no one and nothing left that we have had any effect on - we will be erased. (hope I'm right) i completely agree with what you are saying. this is good writing, and the theme "time dies" is really creative. I'd vote, but I'm not sure what to give this (something high - maybe 4, maybe 5)

Beautiful poem portraying a very complicated theory. Well done.