That's sooooo good. I love it!!!!!! YAY poema! 5/5 hun

RavEy

I love how simple, yet so powerful this poem is at the same time. It uses simple language, which suits this poem very well, and it really shows how you feel, and that you are strong in the way you think. Which is always good on this topic. It was written very well, good job. =] 5/5

Tammie

Beautiful doll, screams you in a heart tearing manner.. Miss you and happy birthday
>Aven<

Wow, I really like tis poem. You are an excellent poem... But I already knew that didn't I?

(Guess who)
Ayanda

Know the feeling ;] The poem is really good =] Some parts really make you say Wow =) examples:
- But I cannot fly if you oppress me. Just a beautiful sentence, which says a lot.
-Do not shape me to fit your sleeve. And again just a nice sentence =]
Good work.
5/5
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