Comments : Take a chance.

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Liiiiiiisa,

    I like this piece. =)
    It isn't your best,
    but it's still good.

    You're super talented,
    you know.
    I love you.

    E>

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This was very interesting and actually a bit surprising to read, much different structure than you've done before, and it works well imo. Well done and well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Great piece of writing, Sweetie.
    Keep up the good work.
    ily xxx
    5/5
    - Heather