Again well done this poem was amazing. You are a talented writer keep it up. 5/5

Wow, thats really good, i have a suggestion, when i was reading this it made me think of a guy in my life, always been there for me but i tried so hardd finding a reason to push him away but in reality there was none, and i couldnt find a way to hate him. lately i lost him as he passed away last month, i was maybe thinking of you wanted to add to this poem, how about writing how you would feel if you lost him for good? just an idea xxxx although i must admit, it sounds good if you leave it alone? xxxx

It was so well written, the flow was good, wording was good, i like this one better. but still 5/5