Comments : This World We Live In

  • 16 years ago

    by bella

    Awesome poem keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This a really good poem..it is so true and people really need to understand what you are saying in this poem. Im so glad that im not the only one who sees that this world is all fake! The flow was great and it was all around a good pen! Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done
    you penned this well, you showed your feelings, the things you believed in and the honesty of this poem was the best thing about it
    keep writing
    love Tara-Kay
    xxxx