A very good poem.Pleasw write MORE!. Very good poem. Powerful imagery. Write more.!!!

Very vivid, but i like it

This poem is so full of emotion.I liked it alot.

Kelsie

Very powerfully done. Some very beautiful and powerful words used, such as:
T"he bruises and scars
Are more visible than stars"
But more inportantly, you've placed into words what pretty much everyone does every day through words such as these:
"She hides and cries
She smiles and lies
But inside...
While she'll hide
She dies."
So much emotion is placed within this poem and I love it!!!