Comments : The Big One

  • 13 years ago


    Thanks for your comments. I read at least 10 of your poems. This one was different . It showed a lighter more whimsical, carefree side. This poem as well as your others shows a master of imagery and rhyme. Smooth unforced flow, the type of poetry I like reading.

  • 12 years ago

    by John Long

    Your signature style of erotic and sensual poetry is always very good but it is nice to see you branching out occasionally. Shows the depth, scope and versatility of your writing. The cadence and flow of this poem is as smooth as the ride itself. Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Pete

    Wodnerful style used here, I have noticed that you are more one for the erotica type poems. I think this really suits your imagination and style of writing. This piece comes accross as not just fun, but very very daring.

    Wonderful flow to the poem throughout, glides from stanza to stanza effortlessly.

    Very nice work on this one.


  • 12 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Great and exciting poem, keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by Riffy

    Aah this was different!
    I liked it though, made me laugh (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Lucy Vandenberg

    Well written in style and rhyme

  • 11 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    It was cute, and not the outcome i was expecting. thanks for the comment on my poems. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Aw it's cute :) I liked it alot, really different from other stuff I've read. Thanks for your comment on my poem 5/5 :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Em

    Your braver then me haha. Very well written, 5/5. Em x