Thanks for your comments. I read at least 10 of your poems. This one was different . It showed a lighter more whimsical, carefree side. This poem as well as your others shows a master of imagery and rhyme. Smooth unforced flow, the type of poetry I like reading.

Your signature style of erotic and sensual poetry is always very good but it is nice to see you branching out occasionally. Shows the depth, scope and versatility of your writing. The cadence and flow of this poem is as smooth as the ride itself. Great job!

Wodnerful style used here, I have noticed that you are more one for the erotica type poems. I think this really suits your imagination and style of writing. This piece comes accross as not just fun, but very very daring.

Wonderful flow to the poem throughout, glides from stanza to stanza effortlessly.

Very nice work on this one.

~Pete.

Great and exciting poem, keep it up.

Aah this was different!
I liked it though, made me laugh (:
xxx.

Well written in style and rhyme

It was cute, and not the outcome i was expecting. thanks for the comment on my poems. 5/5

Aw it's cute :) I liked it alot, really different from other stuff I've read. Thanks for your comment on my poem 5/5 :)

Your braver then me haha. Very well written, 5/5. Em x