I knew it. I knew there was so much more inside of you, so much more to see in your poetry, I was just waiting..
Until,
YOU unleashed the rath of your anger on everyone, on the world. You know what, you're the most passionate person that I know. Knowledge is power babyyyy! You hold so much power in your hands, more than you could ever imagine.

I adore the fortitude and strength of the poem's tone of voice. The message was, indeed, outstanding and noteworthy. A well-presented work, nonetheless. =] Thank you for sharing!

Marian

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Congratulations!

That was en excellent!!!!!!! poem

Four words.. i absolutely love it

Wow... This is really... how would i put it... well very political and human. A really GREAT right! Keep it up ;)

U bum....i hate it that u r so good at sritin
u hav riten so many great poems and i dunno how u went thru life widout ritin em
haha now i noe wad ur lil notebook was 4 :)

luvvjess:)

Hehe latino pues asi es no? ur right this true drug lords do manipulate the young, and how ppl hide their hate to others.. its very true great piece hmm thats cool AMORyPAZ love and peace

This is so true...there are still racist people in this world now more than ever antes nomas era una raza ahora todos se odian. Good Job
I liked this poem

Very good i loved it 5/5

Nice job, I love how all those "key words and people" all blended together so well...well done.
Thanks for the comment!
Chin up, Eleni

That was an amazing poem.