I was wondering if you based this poem off of the book Twilight by: Stephanie Meyer because it is exactly like it!

I love it!

It's a really good poem, but i got confused as to what it meant after the 3rd stanza (i think it was the 3rd). but other than that i really enjoyed the input of mythical creatures

Strange but interesting. it had a good rythym to it but it could maybe do with a couple of touch ups?

5 from 5 work though