This is great im sure many kids would love it, i loved poems like this when i was little 5/5.

Cute one : )

I liked this poem alot as well. thought it was cutee.. lol but the last line. it threw me off a little bit. seems like it was missing a word or something... i'm not sure. but other then that good work :)

Good job expressing in a better form. Keep writing.

Nazeer

Hahaha!!! cute! love it!! really clever and well written!

A very Delightful poem I enjoyed reading it and a wonderful teacher Plot121

I found this adorably sweet and refreshing =)

I thought this was both original and unique in concept, and you pulled it of wonderfully.

The flow was good throughout the piece and I found the ending to be very sweet, it brought out a smile on my face.

I found this more inspiring and refreshing than humourous, because of the children's essence to it, but nevertheless it was beautifully written.

Hahaha ^_^
This Poem Put A Smile On My Face, The Childish Essence Is Great ^_^
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