Comments : A Picture Of You

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    Is the boy dying?
    Why she said
    "I never had a moment to think,
    I'll be sitting here by your side like this"?
    "I keep talking that you'll get through this,
    Yes, you will,
    You have to."

    I'm dumbass, sorry... ^^
    But I enjoy it.
    It's so real.
    Interesting poem.
    Great job. ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I loved the whole aspect of this poem, it told a story and it brought tears to my eyes. However, the flow was a bit off and it skipped around at a few parts. I think if you just edited a few lines it would be perfect. Great job. :]