Good job on this piece. Great message.

life can lead us in many ways,some miserable times too.
we can continue to pray,and feel our way in navigation.
let them live their life happy,as tomorrow may never come.
so speak those words today,before the time runs out.
the darkness shall fade one day.,and with this dawn a new day.

This was a really great stanza.
Keep writing.
Take care Cindy

Very nice message within this poem....nicely done....I espedially like the line:

would take my looks with little pride,what i care about is inside.

So true.....All the best, Debbie

Beautiful poem.. a very enjoyable read.. the flow was reallly nice except hard to find because of the rhyme scheme.. its different in every stanza and then the last stanza doesnt rhyme at all.. other than that this poem still a fantastic poem... the message was strong as well as the choice of words..

5/5

The message in this was amazing.. i loved it

let them live their life happy,as tomorrow may never come.
so speak those words today,before the time runs out.

^ i loved those lines, they really spoke to me. I loved this style of writing, and I think you're really good at writing this way. 5/5 from me, and thanks a lot for the comment, I really appreciate.

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