A few misspellings but overall good. If you like sad poems trying reading my Mercury Tears and Cloudless. You'll like those.

I've got to work on the misspellings =S
I'll take a look at your poems ;) *

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I loved it girl :):):)

it is nice one :):):)):):)

keep up the gud work:):):)

i will give ya 5/5:):);)...

I am tired of waiting.
I am waiting no more.
For you i am now dead.
Don't come knocking one my door.

that stanza was very sad. but you all poem was so good. it was you talent that reflects in your poetry. i alwasy appriciate these type of writes..
take care

and i will must give you 5/5