Comments : Do You Know What It Feels Like?

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Powerful poem. I could feel the emotion in every stanza. The flow was a little off but other than that it was great. I know a little of how that feels. If he is like that you should leave him. It will hurt but you'll find someone who really and truelly does love you and will treat you the way you should be treated. But that is only what I think. Anyways I gave this poem a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by tyanna

    There was emotion all throughout this poem but the flow was off. There were also some things that didn't make much sense..
    "To you, there's nothing that want to say"
    Not sure what that means...maybe..theres nothing I want to say??? Not sure though..
    Overall I think it was an alright poem..but could use some proofreading...4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    Yeah, i actually know what it feels...(i know it was a rhetorical (did i spell right?) question, but i just felt like answering it....)
    your poem is filled with emotion, what i appreciate the most in a poem, the best poem 4 me is the one who can tell me something, you know, the opposite of "roses are red, violets are blue" stuff...
    it looks like your poem says much to yourself and that makes a poem much better than if you do it just because you felt like writing anything...
    i shall not speak about flow or rhyme, not because it wasn't good, but because the emotion of this is so much that...
    let me see if i can explain it properly: this poem get's right into the reader's heart...
    and that's poetry for me...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Beautiful poem, so much emotion through it.. i love how you worded it and everythin 5/5
    xx