You left out a word in the last line, other thatn that this was really good. I like the word choice simple yet effective, the emtion was heartfelt and the flow was alright, the flow was rocky in a few places, tip: Read the poem out loud to yourself, and see how well it soungd, and fits togather. You also catilize you I's too, and add punction, it wpold make this alot strong of a read. well written, Baby D 5/5
Silver Rose

This is the truth poem hate can destroy everything. and love can be gone. this is the real reality of this world you showd in your poem i loved it i will give you must 5/5