For the stanzas that you wrote:

You're a wonderful poetess. You really know how to control minimalistic visualizations. In your case, less is more, and that's a great trait to have. Much love, kitty.

Wow you guys that was really really beautiful, the imagery was absoulty clear and vivid, the word choice was amazing, the deep emtion put into this well penned, well wriiten poem were clear, and strong. An excellent job deserves the best 5/5

Your format?
I loved it,
It wasn't perfect that it made it perfection.

Lol.
I'm weird, I know.
But stll.
I didn't really find anything wrong with this poem.
It's quite... poetic.
Lol.
I can use my senses for this poem (ie: hear, see, smell, blah)
Alll in all.
Definite 5, dear.

Excellent poem
I find most war related poems boring
but this one was nicely written
I actually felt the emotion
I actually imagined myself as this man
it was an enjoyable read
5/5

I can perfectly see the scene you are trying to convey in this poem, but the only problem is, is it's forgettable. I went to write the comment and had to re-read the poem because I had forgotten most of it. However, it is a fairly nice poem, and I like that you did a collab.

Holy HELL
"that numbs a bullet ripping through his chest. "
that sent shivers down my spine it was chillingly BEAUTIFUL absolutely mesmerizing i LOVED every second of that poem!!!
The way his loved ones voice, his memories of her, drowned out every painful and horrible thing in war it was so beautiful.
i especially liked how there wasnt a fixed, expected, rhyme scheme, it emphasised the unexpected bullet at the end.
beautiful =]
well done
if u have time please comment my latest?

Great poem. You two did a good job on this poem. I gave it a 5/5.

Ok, this was another great one by you.... you have done another great job through your poetry.

This poem is great. really go with the collqaboration thing, the imagery is amazingly clear. excellent wording. 5/5

I really liked it. The second stanza was a bit off flow wise, but the rest of it was brilliant work; words stuck out to me and I could feel the emotion in this.
Nicely done.

xTheEcstaysofSuicidex 5.5