I liked it. I thought that it was great. It had nice word choice and the flow was great. I also liked the format you used. I gave it a 5/5.

Really good! *claps for you* I like it! More poem power to you! ^ ^

This was really great and keep it up i know that u can do it so keep on writting

i hope that u like some of my poems also

kriss

This stirred up some painful emotions in me. Great job writing this. It almost literally reached out and touched me with feeling. Amazing write. 5/5.