Very deep n dark. liked the idea that it was his silence that "killed" u inside... 4/5

I liked it more girl :):)

you are a good writer ;)

so keep up girlo:):):)

Short and simple, yet i can relate and understand. not that u need to kno my whole bakground, but i went through this. so ya, keep up the good work. its amazing how just a couple of stanzas can make a powerful message

Truly amazing

Wow this one is my favorate!
Nice writing.

So very original
i love the idea of the story introduction.
great job.