It's nicely written, but I would write (in the second stanza) : " I dislike them
hate them"
'cause the "hate" is stronger emotion, so it's logical to me that it comes second... (this is just my opinion)

It was good 4/5 the beging just a little work and the ending was a little kinda random but liked it.

Dislike them, = I dislike them (no comma, either)

thoughts I have, = thoughts I have (no comma)

devour you, = devour you; (semi-colon)

demons, = demons: (colon)

and in your end-note: its not good = It's not good

The poem, overall, seemed... pointless. An abstract poem. It didn't catch my eye, it didn't strike me odd nor did it make me think or inspire me. The poem itself was well written, aside from your lack of correct use of punctuation, but your flow, syllabication (even in free verse poems syllabication does exist) and word use seemed intricate. But that was it... the intricacy was used in not the meaning but the appearance of the meaning... That isn't necessarily bad but if you want to have poems that hit people hard, make them stronger and more meaningful, rather than just fancy.

All-the-same, well done =]
5/5
~Stephen White

It was good