Short and straight to the point. well done. this poem was insighting and thoughtful.

excellent work. 5/5 david

I like the seeming relationship established between the subject and the water along with their distinct attributes. It certainly is poetically insightful and lovely.

A pleasure to read, nonetheless. =] Keep them coming, sweets!

Take care,
Marian

Lovely words and imagery. I'd agree with David, it's short and straight to the point. However you've managed to pack in a lot of beauty into it as well! =) Beautiful piece..

Chavii
I can image running my finger through the cool water :) Great !
Take Care
Cindy

I read your poem and found it quite an easy read and a pleasant piece. Keep up the good words. May the ebb and flow of your thoughts and emotions find a good spot to call home.

Chavii,

I love this. The imagery was so beautiful && vivid. I could picture everything in my mind. :]]

"Crystal water longingly savours her beautiful face.
as she gently makes twirls with finger"

^ Wow. :] I wish I could write like that. Fantastic job, Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I wonder what inspires you for writing such meaningful/beautiful poems. This is really ultimate....so much of depth and i really love poems where you have to use some brain also along with heart.

keep writing...great poem

all the best and take care

It's a very good poem indeed... but it's too short to me... it's brilliantly written though!

Very beautiful.....in such few words.....amazing images.....All the best, Debbie

Great poem. It has an emotion that flows through it. I really enjoyed this poem alot. 5/5 .... Keep writting from the heart.

Chan
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Wow i really like this poem

"Bewitched by her enigmatic touch"

I loved that line.
This was such a short and sweet poem yet it held so much depth to it, just like the water she's rippling..
Well done sweets
5/5
*Gem*

Chavii,it was a pleasure reading this short poem.Keep it up.