U hit the right points in this poem. if only... but men have become monsters every single one of us! just look at the problem of hunger, we all have more food then we really need while other ppl starve, when we see images of that we are shocked... how hypocritical. "evil prevails when good men do nothing". 4/5

Excellent poem of life as it is, good flow and you made your point and expressed yourself well. to you ,5/5 your friend Tracy dean

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i love how you expressed yourself.

This was deep and really true. We witness this everytime. Know what, children are one of the most vulnerable group. They contribute less to some of our problems but the get affected the most but all of our actions. This was great, it appreciates our children and how much they need direction.