I like it alooot
keep up the good work ::::::D

I like it alooot
keep up the good work ::::::D

You're a natural! really really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Hey you really have a talent of visual description in your poems.. beautiful

Nice dear I Liked reading this piece. THe wordings are great. U just need change you in the last line to you're. anyways 5/5