I always love your poems Karl, they are creative and thought provoking. You never leave me disappointed. Good job!

I did enjoy this one, it was dark, the imagery was good.
It started of more gripping, the ending left me a little dissapointed. But overall, a good write
love Tara-Kay
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I adore the ending you used here...very unexpected and a real twist.
The imagery you portrayed here created very vivid pictures, word choice was a joy to read, and the flow was flawless throughout.

Uve got action in there...nice imagery....and not to mention....suspense!!!

I liked the rhyming scheme you used. The flow was great and the word choice was awesome. I gave it a 5/5.

This poem is wonderfuly penned with great emotion and talent showing,
the ryhme was a great one. you are so talented, keep it up.

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it. great job...

Great poem! very well written! keep it up! i really liked it. 5/5

Your first stanza?
The only thing I didn't like about it
Was that you already know from the first line
That it's going to be a story.
That's just a turn off for me.
All in all, discriptive, dear.
Very nice.

While unprepared for whats [[about]] to unfold.
You should erase about.
It just sounds better, flows better without it.

"Why did I walk tonight", I quietly whine,
Ironic, if it was me.
I would probably ask the same thing.

Ending?
Perfecto.
It's like... a thing I have.
What's that word? Ah... paranoia.
Whenever I go outside, I always think of the worst.
Lol.

All in all, dear?
Wonderful write :]

Haha, ok Karl. This was set up like a murder, and then a rape, then some cowardly fool imagining things...and then of course the poem wrapped up with a schizophrenic. Which is it?! The last line threw me off completely.

5/5 because we're friends.

Ah another wonderful poem! Keep up the wonderful write! The flow was great and you had a great use of words that detailed your fear and scene of the poem. God Bless 5/5
<3tay

Wow this is really amazing. i definitely enjoyed reading it. there was so much emotion in it. it was deep. keep it up 5/5

~Kristina

D**e that waz so orgasmic

As for me, I don't find its climax particularly orgasmic. It merely was a compelling, intense piece of work. A pleasurable read, nonetheless. I'm quite certain that most of the people--if not all--can correlate with the substance of this poem. Nice job. 5/5

Marian

Wow what a chilling poem.. doesn't help that I'm sitting outside in my dark backyard as I'm reading this .. haha ..but wow amazingly written and I can really sense the fear and feel the emotion as i read it.. nicee job 5/5

Gripping detail. Imagery...I suppose intense. Flow...smooth. Overall it's a cool read. Not exactly a fave but something that can be enjoyed nevertheless. A dark, cool write. It's a situation that adds to the eerie feel that's in this piece.
~Faith-less

Beautifully written poem. I have to say, one of my favorites. Good job.

Wow...I love it...Amazing rhyming is excellent keep it up hun peace.
&hearts;Heaven Leigh&hearts;

Wow i really loved it. it had a great flow, and even though it got to be morbid and frightening it wasn't too much, it was good. great job 5/5

An intriguing poem. It kept me interested the whole time, wondering what was about to happen next. The vocab and descriptiveness created great imagery and acted out the scenes very well in my mind. The end really tied up the whole poem. I really enjoyed this piece. =] 5/5

Tammie

Wow. thats deep. i really like it. there is a sense of tention and wonder of what going to happen next. 5/5

xo kisses xo