Another great poem Jack.

I like this poem a lot because I had to read it a few times to understand it. Is it about losing someone? I think the 'dark fog' is a great representation of the fading clarity in someone's memory, when another person is no longer there. I especially like the ambiguity at the end - I like poems that make me think and this one did exactly that.

This is a very mature poem Jack.

Mr. P