Good subject never thought or heard of it though its big thanks to you and ya plz honestly comments on my poems and quotes 5/5 FOR YOUR WORK keep finding such good topics friend

This was really good.
i liked it =]

Aii, that's a rel nice poem..... good job..
I can relate to it a lot..

*-aveena

Jus a suggestion on the line ;
I LAID AYTHING OUT ON THA TABLE RIGHT THEN AN THERE

aything = should be "everything "