Trul a wonderful poem to read and so full of insight.

I think we all feel like this every once in a while. good work.

I love the short, truncated lines in the beginning. They are expressed so bluntly, as if they are facts and everyone knows them. It really sets the mood for the piece.

A few typos in the third and fourth stanzas ("who�s around", "forget I�m even" and "�m just God�s failed", these happen a lot when you copy and paste when you submit). The very last one really takes away from the meaning, I would make sure to change this right away. Again, the lines are getting short toward the end; helping to heighten my suspense.

In the last stanza, MATHS should be MATH.

Otherwise, this is very well written. I love the short powerful lines and I like how everything seems to be spoken like everyone knows it. There is no empty lines that people could misread and the mood is well played.

Great job. I have a lot of poems similar to this, so I know it can be hard to express your point without overplaying it.