Great rhyming in this poem, the fact the poem makes real sene makes it even beeter.
I epeshally like this part:

waiting until i am gone
but with a long sigh
i keep moving on

"i cannot cry
oh i do not weep
within myself
my emotions they sleep"
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u started smoothly and ended off with a bang!
Great job.. great flow and good use of language.. looking forward to read more of your work..