Comments : Waiting

  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    This one is really good too. 5/5. especially liked the part where u say:
    "You've moved on, I'm stuck here waiting.
    The feelings I'm feeling I'm stuck debating."

    the stuck part! he has moved on but u on the other hand are still living in the memories of the past. i know the feeling. i've always been like that. n it's hard to move on especially when u know what could have been...

    anyways excellent write. only 3 poems so far huh? well continue writing. and if u still write at such high quality then i'll add u as a fav.

  • 16 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Meh.....grrr i hate this i feel the EXACT way this poem is depressing. it was so deep and i can tell you wrote this with everything that you are and not just with ur imagination..meh EXCELLENT WORK keep it up!