I love your abstract view to the speaker's emotions and/or feelings. The metaphors used blew me away, and my favorite line, though all were profound, was:
"Cutting me like flowers,
Carving me to blue,"
You continue to make my mind wander in different poetry techniques and different views to look upon. Keep it up, you have a nice comfortable spot on my favorite's list.

The flow was smooth and the words awesome. Definitely something cool. You have a talent to turn anything from the profound to the tedious and bland into a cool write. I love the imagery and how it all blends together quite well.
~Faith-less

This poem was really deep and it was great! There was tons of emotion in it and I can relate to it, as I know other can. You did a great job! 5/5

~Kristina