The rhyme and flow was mostly really good, apart from a couple of the last verses felt a bit forced, and there were a few spelling errors, but aside from that it was a brilliant poem on a good subject =]

((i know the feeling, take care...))

emo love,
carry

I liked it.

If its a true situation..
Just be yourself allways..

'' you laugh at me 'cause i'm different.. i laugh at you 'cause you're all the same ''

**

Man,if this is based on a true situation,you totally almost made me cry..
don't worry,i totally understand what you mean..
other than that,
your rhythm was great except at some of the verses that didn't really rhyme..
But hey, who cares??,your poem was GREATLY WRITTEN!!
plus it was meaningful!
keep it up!

-emo cupid,thats me!

Awww thx you guys I love your comments ad yes it is a real situation

Hi! I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Your words create such strong emotions, but I felt they could become even more powerful with visuals.

I’m a freelance artist with 3 years of experience, and I can turn the feelings and imagery in your poems into illustrations so readers can actually see the words come to life. We could even start with one poem or a few stanzas as a small project.

I’d also love to share a few ideas on how visuals could help you reach a wider audience and create another way to benefit from your poetry.

If you’re interested, feel free to reach me here:

llunarlibrary@gmail.com
Instagram: @lunaartsoul

Warm Regards,
LunarLibrary