I can totally agree - you know who really cares when you put on a face thats different than who you really are. i love the last line, and the whole thing has good rhythm!

Whoa....whoa there! youre too amazing! Im very envious! That poem relates to just about anyone and everyone, thats a tough thing to accomplish! You made it look easy to write so smoothly! I am truly addicted to it...I read it about 4 times! The words...those are...wow..."pathetic" that was my favorite word...it just added something to the poem that made it even more perfect!

~N~

Whoa....whoa there! youre too amazing! Im very envious! That poem relates to just about anyone and everyone, thats a tough thing to accomplish! You made it look easy to write so smoothly! I am truly addicted to it...I read it about 4 times! The words...those are...wow..."pathetic" that was my favorite word...it just added something to the poem that made it even more perfect!

~N~