Oustanding tracy! bravo! very, very nice!
your friend to the end
god bless

I like this poem. I think its very inspirational. To show that the absolute, unthinkable hell you went through in the end you managed to come out the other side and didnt let them corrupt your mind, you seem a true and very good person! I think your poems are amazing and the work you do is so important. These poems are also important to highlight these problems and im by ignoring them they are only going to get worse. (5/5)

Kelly
xx

Very good work. I love this poem, it says so much and means so much. I'm sorry that you had to go through that. I know what it's like. And I'm still at a young age and find it difficult to go through. But you did it. And I know if you did it, other children around the globe can to. Your work is very inspirational. Great job. Keep up the good work. I enjoy reading it. Your friend, Hilary

~Backs like a candy cane
stripes up and down~
I visualized that, very good wording!! Very sad poem, but the use of your words are powerful!
And how can anyone starve a child purposely, that is soooo cruel.......
Sometimes one wonders if they were human at all.......