This is a really nice poem...the message is really deep and it's full of emotion...
the flow is a little off, though...
probably for being a translation...
i'd like to know swedish, to be able to read the original piece...i'm sure it's wonderful...
but all i know is french, german, english and portuguese...(with portuguese i manage to get more or less spanish, but...)
well, forgeting the languages...(i hope you're not getting bored...
this was a really nice poem...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*