That's really sad. I think I would have the same thoughts about that person who abused me like you wrote in your last lines. I am really sorry that such things happened to you..

Tracy
Pieces like these are hard to read when you know the truth behind them. It takes so much to pen your story. I know it is not in vain. Keep writing.
Take Care Cindy

I truely believe that the people who did this to you are in hell. And if you have managed to forgive them (dont think i could) then you might not want to hear that but i dont think it is possible for a crime like this to go unpunished. Superb poem, gets right in under your skin. Take care

Kelly
xx

Wow this was truely sad.. it was beautifully written! great work
robyn xoxo

Very nice poem and with a very valuable message. You have highlighted a very important issue. max rating from me

I dont quite no what to say. this is a beautifully sorrowful and hits the reader with such a serious problem. i think this combination is truly moving.

This is so heartbreaking to read, and yet so beautifully written...the flow was good throughout, the imagery you portrayed wonderfully done, and the ending is hardhitting and intense.

My friend...you write so well. When I read it, I can feel your pain...wanting to take it away from you some how. Keep writing :)

Shar

This is a good poem,I've gone through some things with my family..drinking, hitting etc. all the "good" stuff. And I know how painful it is even when it was so long ago..This is a very nice poem, two thumbs up!