I really like this poem alot i know how you feel thats how i felt to my loved one, but you know you can let im go but if you can i know how it is keeep it up very good

I loved it girl:):):)
so keep up the good work:):):)

Very good poem! 5/5!
just the last 2 verses which in my opinion are too short. they could use adjectives like for example:
"sweet images in my brain
like memorable pictures in a frame"

Just a suggestion... :)

I like this one.
Its exactly how i feel about my ex...
Your better at writing then me >.<
thanks for the comments.

This is short,
but the emotion is strong
and you get your point across.
great job