Comments : The Start of the Flight

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    O0o0o!! I like that!! ^_^ good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I can somewhat relat to this one. It was a a good read and write. It has great word choice and a nice flow. The only problem I had was that it is so short. I gave it a 5/5.