Wow, this is truly a great write with a deep meaning and emotions in it. you have showed your great talent through this poem, keep up the great work cause they are amazing.

That is sad. how can people actually do something like that??? well... your flow was good, the vocabulary was pretty simple though it suited the poem so that was okay. it was pretty beautiful though.
5/5
gabriella

Wow great poem!!!!!! I love your writing its so deep!
~laura~

Aww.. Lucy!
That was wonderful.. So sad and full of emotions.
The flow was great.. and the vocabulary perfect.
I loved it hun,
Well done,
Elly (elaine)

Wow that was so great. The vocabulary was simple, but the message was clear, and it was so deep and emotional, and flowed perfectly. Perfect poem, I would say : )

Lucy this poem is so beautiful. it's really sad, but it is so beautiful. i could feel your pain when i read it. i know what you mean and can understand. i'm so sorry.

keep smiling. things always get better if you keep a happy mental attitude.

very beautiful poem. i like it very much.

It surely is! :(
well, I think everybody agrees with what you've said here.
that is such an interesting question to think about. you chose the title really well Lucy.

Marjan