Comments : A Poem Without Substance

  • 16 years ago

    by Aussie

    Wow, so little but shouts out

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    These words prove you still have the flavor lingering....... well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    Wow this is amazing...you are such a good writer. I never could've thought of something to write like that. Keep it up

    Madison

  • 16 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    Nikkz.. 5/6 lines of brilliance nahmsayin??.. i f'in love you girl... i miss you like H-word sista... you so talented.. it must run in dat blood of ours ya dig?.. haha.. get at ya boy sometime will you?..

    -ya future husband/ brotha...

    lol.. thas some inscest stuff.. but you know i wanna tap dat so bad ..Lol lol..wit yo fine yella self...

    dey tryna say a dude cant cuss n wat not... F DAT!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Short, true, make so much sense ;)
    Good job!
    5.5.
    Sarah :)