Wow yeah thats the ending point 5/5 i liked it alot maybe u could read one of mine,.

Great poem. i love the imagery... the nails and needles in the side. my favorite lines are
"but I am about at the end, and nothing is
going to satisfy." so, once again, good job!

I loved ittt... that was soo good! i really like your style of writing. and the flow was great! 5/5 from me :]

I really like it the flow was awesome! 5/5

This is really good! I like that it's different, but it really made sense to me and i especially like the part about the needles. Good piece :)