WOW best poem i read all day I could feel the power of this poem and the affection 5/5 trully great transition and style. Maybe u could read one of mine. YOur poem is the first one to go on my favorite poems list.

Wonderful poem =) i love ur desplay name, that song is amazing! comment my poems plz =) - Megan

I liked this poem its really good keep up the good work:)~melissaraye~

Wow that was great! I loved it....

Excellent poem, sad and deep, felt the hurt and be tail, well written piece, great job , your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Our love was a battle waiting to be lost
this poem makes me wanna say
"yea what she said"
i love the way u put emotion into
ur poems and i hope that u keep
up this amazing work

What a beautiful heartfelt piece. i loved the emotion and depth you portrayed in this piece. the similies you used added for a powerful effect on the overall piece. you opened this beautifully and it just got better as it went along. flow was good throughout as was the imagery. i loved the ending line, i found it to be very intense and hardhitting.

I love the bitterness, its fantastic!

Great diction. Very well poem.

~And I've realized i don't need you, you liar~
(Ouch!!)

That was wicked awesome! *High five*

5/5