Comments : Suicide ghost

  • 16 years ago

    by shadowknight

    How about
    blood of a hero

    just a suggestion
    i like the poem,
    it shows that anyone will do what they have to. including suicide

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    I belive
    "A Cold Soul"

    The female is having thoughs and speaks of suicide. Saying this person is you. The thoughts come from the Soul does it not? Also your soul feels like a blizzard. Therefore defining Cold. It also means Lost and hurt.

    So A "Cold""Soul" Would match the poem. If you spent time and read it over and over again.

    A Cold Soul.

  • 16 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    Thanks for you suggestions
    i like " blood of a hero"
    yet " a cold soul" really does suit the poem,but cold is quite a plain word,i'll use the name, but change it to "chilled"
    thanks! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Wow, this was deffinately an amazing poem love. it was capturative and into depth. great job mate. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    This is a really good poem! well done 5/5 XD

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Really great poem, i really can relate, keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lacie

    Good-job 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Marie

    Great job. Flow was beautiful