Comments : Memories of yesterday

  • 14 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    Wow i really liked this. i like the desciption of "taped up feelings". its such a good word to describe it, and so different from over used words. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I love this poem.. its soo cute and i like the metaphors or whatever it is.. the way you describe your feelings.. its sounds really nice.. i love this poem.. AND I LOVE YOU TOO :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Another fantastic piece, I understand your feelings in the poem like they were my own, we often wish we could just start new and forget the past but the past never seems to fade. Amazing job and great imagery and flow once again, I'm adding you and this poem to my fav's. Your an excellent writer and your poems are real. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    It was such a nice writing style. i realy do not know why a tear came from my eyes. its awesome aswell. specialyit was nicely panned poem. you have great talent. you should keep it up this goodwork

    excellent piece ofwork.
    i loved that stanza
    lost and now forgotten
    are the places we used to stay
    gone right now forever
    are memories of yesterday

    here i will must give you 5/5

    take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was rather delightful to read. I love the metaphors you applied which conjour ~stark~ images on the whole piece. The flow was rather craggy at the beginning portion, whereas its overall impact wasn't affected negatively at all. It was, in fact, nicely done and well-presented throughout. ~Debbie

  • 14 years ago

    by Nina Mendoza

    Hey that was a really good poem. keep up the good work. id love to read more.

  • 14 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was an excellent bit of writing. The lines trasitioned well and the stanzas all fit into the overall theme of the poem. My favorite stanza was the second to last.

    ripped and torn up feelings
    are the things that we face
    fallen chipped and broken
    are the memories we erase

    However, the whole poem was amazing and represented your talent as a poet. 5/5.

  • 14 years ago

    by Gypsy

    I loved it, it was truely brilliant.
    It flowed really well and the imagery was very original.
    I especially liked the similarities of the 1st stanzas and the last stanzas and the finality of the last lines x

  • 14 years ago

    by Anna

    I Really Loved That.
    It Flowed Great, and matched the way I feel so well.

  • 14 years ago

    by trixy17

    I adore it!! I love this line
    -lost and now forgotten
    are the places we used to stay-

    Amazing poem!xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Viridiana

    Hey! u have a great talent for writing poems and ur poem really got me thinking!! keep up the great work!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Katie Louise

    I love this poem so much, it's so beautiful and I can really relate to it now, as my mum is dying of cancer, so I really understand it. Thank you xoxo

  • 13 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Hey we have the same name, i've never met anyone like that before, loved the poem. you name your poems the PERFECT names, you have a real nack for it i wish i could think up names half as good as that, love your poems, so i was wondering if you could give me some feedback on some of mine, it would be greatly appreciated

  • 13 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Amazing poem, I can feel the emotion inside...