Another great poem. I'm glad I read it. 5/5

RavEy!

It's funny how so many people tell us to do something yet they do it themselves, parents for example. Great write and the words were so true 5/5

This was a very well written poem. i really like what it was about and all. nicely done! 5/5

~Kristina

Very good, I can relate to that definately. The flow was ok, but the word work was great. 5/5

This poem was difficult to understand because of the way you worded it.. also i didnt really understand what emotion or story this poem was trying to give off... although the structure is fine the flow wasnt really there.. i'd give it a 3/5 but i will vote a 5 anyway to keep your score at a perfect 5

Hey babe
I really liked the last line in the last stanza
"something unbecoming to you. "
that was cool. =]
well done
take care
Geo
xioxoxo

Like 4 real disz poem wusz really go0d nd i actually really do like ur poemsz dey have meaning nd also if i wusz u i would hang wit dat hipocrit no moree ;) (just a suggestiionn) still 5/5

Always seeming to be looking
for something to accuse you of
[[I like those lines.]]

Why would you want to do that?
You're skinny enough already.
[[I'm not sure why, but I also liked these lines. They stuck out to me...they had meaning; I could <feel> what you wanted me to, I guess.]]

Don't look at me like done
something unbecoming to you.
[[I'm thinking you messed up this line. I liked where you were going, though, I think.
I'd like to read it
"Don't look at me;
It's unbecoming on you."
Something like that? Yeah.]]

I didn't really like it, but I could <feel> the emotion in it, which is important. It may not be your best write, but we all have to vent.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Uh, yeah...okay there something about it that I kinda liked but at the same time there was something working against it. I like the last stanza. The flow was a little off now and then because of some of the wording. It's actually interesting though.
~Faith-less

I really enjoyed this poem, it kind of reminded me of my relationship with my mother.

I really enjoyed this poem, it kind of reminded me of my relationship with my mother.

This was great!