Okay, this was just random to me.
It was as though you didn't know what you were doing.
You were just adding spaces everywhere.

I don't know...
I didn't even find a flow in here.
It was just strange for me.

4.5

I understood this..and poems dont need to ahve flow because its what it means to the writer that counts the wrods...not the rythm

this was veryy good well donex