This is an excellent poem david, i mean it, it tis long but very good, love the flow and storyline, i give this a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Oh. It's a beautiful piece, David! =D You should be proud indeed. (^^,)

I liked the progression of the plot. It was relatively well-presented, detailed, and pleasurable to read. I'm looking forward to read more of your works. =]

Debbie!

Daviddd!! I love this...just the way you wrote it is amazing. I love the story it told...mainly cuz it was real and came frm the heart. And the idea of the pictures was really creative. Very good write! 5/5

-Me =]

Good write dave. love can change a many things in a man. take care of her because you only get one guardian angel in your life.

It was good..
i wrote a new one myself..
go check it out

There is no music...lol
i cant htink of any

Good job :)

Awe! that was sooo cute! your girl friend must be a lucky gal. But some people aren't lucky enough to find someone who loves enough to write beautiful poetry 'bout them. Well good luck to you and yours. Ummmm... the poem was really good, but i'm afraid that i was not able to gaze upon the pics. But the writting was so good, i was able to paint a mental picture of what was going on. Good job, and keep up the amazing work... as usual. ttyl sumtime.

MBHD

David this is a great poem

Aaaaaawwwwww! How sweet.

....nerd. :p