Comments : Waiting...

  • 16 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    Aww, me too.

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This is great writing - can totally relate to the whole "can't forget my smile" part. nice job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittane

    Wonderfully written.
    ;[ I hate waiting.
    Me=[StillWaiting].
    Great
    great
    great
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    But the thing is
    i cant forget my smile

    i love that line - i know exacty what you mean!

  • 15 years ago

    by MARI

    I really like this poem you expressed ur feeling really well and people can totally relate!!
    good job