Nitin
Thank you for taking your time to do this poem with me. I know how busy you are right now. So that makes this one even more special :)

If life was a dream
Why would I need to sleep?
When I have you by my side
And your heart to keep

I love your ending :) Just perfect. Your friendship has truely been a blessing in my life.
Love you yaar
Cindy

Wow this such heartwarming love poem , so beautiful .we all wish such love to exist in our life which makes ones live worth to live.You two really creat the best of best together :)

Take care
chavii.

P.S. Thank you for your wonderful comment, gave me big smile :D

If life was a dream, this poem would have never been written, and I would have never read such a beautiful write. This is the type of poem that can make anyone smile. I abolutely love it. A very great collab.5/5

` Liz =]

I sure wish life was a dream... Well you two write good poems together! Good job! 5*

Hello, EOE, how do you do today? Debbie wishes you well! (^^,)

I've wondered in pure dismay why you have ceased submitting more works lately. Gee, I was so glad to see you posting once again! Yay, welcome back. :D As for the poem, both you and Ms. Cindy have certainly produced a charming love poem. The two of you never failed to give me a smile right at the end--it was simply uplifting and inspiring and endearing and so-ons and so-ons... Lovely poem, as always. Keep on writing and hope you all the best! Love, Debbie

Hey this was a really good poem =) loved the use of words. great job keep em coming xx

Great collab once again....from the title to each and every line....so well in tune ...you and Cindy write as if you were one and the same! Congrats on another outstanding write!

Beautiful! I love your poetry it is excellent your pieces stand out from many others and speak of a love unknown that only few experience and fewer can write about so well. xox lithium

Very nice write my friend. i'm sorry not to have commented in a while. work has been rough. nice flow and rhyme. good work.

A collab so wonderfully penned that the words from you both merged as one ...
You and Cindy write so beautifully together.

To choose a favorite part ... impossible ... for the entire piece was amazing.

Thank you for relaying the message from Cindy. If you speak to her please tell her I miss her and can't wait till she returns.
Thank you dear heart

Have a wonderful weekend
Luanne