Comments : Realising reality

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A deeply moving piece of poetry 5/5 brilliantly penned... keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    Wow.....thats really heartbreaking...i loved this bit
    "How ironic,
    i live,
    they die."

    great poem!

    xo