Thanks for commenting my stuff, so I thought I'd return the favour. I'm truly honoured to be the first one to comment this poem lol.

Well, i gave it a 5/5 for good writing no mistkes and a excellent word flow. I absolutely loved the line that said: " i can't see anything but except my own face. " brilliant.

Loved it

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Great wording i liked it so dark and deep my 2 fav subjects 5/5

Really good poem, I like the choice of words in it, and every stanza holds a lot of darkened emotions.
Well done, 5/5