This little piece endears me completely.

"they said you would be
a burden to my life"

That couplet gave me the impression of the effects of a premarital sex, or a premature baby, or so-ons or so-ons... But then again, I liked the way the subject seemed to appreciate and acknowledge a priceless pearl in her life. =) Simply endearing. all the best and take care! ~Debbie

This was yet another lovely poem mate.
babies are sposed to be the best thing in a person's life, but there are a few cases in which that's not true, sadly. anyway 5/5.

This touched me in a way I can't even explain. I do nothave children of my own but this write went straight to my core. Short but laoded with originality!!

That is so sweet i love seeing babies because its true everyone is a package of hope for this worlds future God knows we need more good ppl in this life